Ahahahaha!! Nice. X'D

[Hmm... Is english your second laguage? 'Cause there are quite a few spelling mistakes. [I know you trnslated it from french. X'D] Don't shoot meee... I was just wondering. *hides*]

posted by Abused mule on 11 Mar 2008 01:36 pm

LOLL Rebel pigeon!! XDD <3
Thats genius! I look forward to this pigeon yes i do XD

posted by xkrazydog on 11 Mar 2008 02:02 pm

Fifty euros? Hahaha. What a shoddy price for a bounty. The pigeon definitely looks menacing. <--sarcasm.

posted by frozen_shamrocks on 11 Mar 2008 02:14 pm

Your pages are so beautiful! Must keep reading more!

Lol...pigeon!

posted by Bleepla on 11 Mar 2008 02:14 pm

I'll be keeping an eye on this comic..! ;) Looks promising! ^_________________^

posted by Mortisfera (Guest) on 11 Mar 2008 02:27 pm

speechless. ¢¾

posted by tsuyatsuya on 11 Mar 2008 05:29 pm

you obviously have great artistic flair, but your storytelliing is not as smooth as it could be.

keep up the good work lol

posted by unnamed on 11 Mar 2008 05:59 pm

I love your art (ZOMIGOTH, Backgrounds) and I must admit the pace is pretty nice.

posted by Neko with a Katana on 11 Mar 2008 06:13 pm

LMAO! xDD "Bebel the rebel pigeon"!!!! xDDDD

I love this comic so much!! x3 That pigeon is so cute too. :D

GAHH I love all the details you put into your backgrounds and characters. DD:

Can't wait to see more! x3

posted by Oo_Orange_oO on 11 Mar 2008 06:26 pm

haha your characters...i love em XD

posted by BrittanyBromide on 11 Mar 2008 06:40 pm

OMG I LOVE THE LAST PANEL!! XDDDDD
bebel the rebel pigeon! epic pwn!

posted by JANG (Guest) on 11 Mar 2008 09:23 pm

Lol, very nice. xD

posted by DianaD (Guest) on 11 Mar 2008 09:57 pm

LOL. I can't wait to see more. 8D

posted by Oneh (Guest) on 11 Mar 2008 11:27 pm

Hahahaha i love how that bird is smoking... XDDD The rebel pigeon lmao~ XDDDD

posted by Sashikinoneko on 12 Mar 2008 02:19 am

LOL. Miss Desforges must have done something really horrible to be attacked by a pigeon O_o.

posted by knee on 12 Mar 2008 02:50 am

Oh man. This comic is great.

posted by Tteok on 13 Mar 2008 07:52 am

ahahahahaha....

pOoR gUY.... ahahaha XD

posted by smAk on 13 Mar 2008 08:51 am

I love your art and how much detail you put into everything. You should get someone to proofread your english for you though, all the spelling mistakes and grammar errors can really take away from how great your story is.

posted by Ari (Guest) on 14 Mar 2008 07:25 pm

Aww I love the guy. :< ♥

posted by Nadya on 14 Mar 2008 07:37 pm

LOL
"O dear contract! IT's so good to see you!!!"

He sounded so desperate!! XDDD

posted by bAbY_AbAlOnE on 15 Mar 2008 09:13 am

'Bebel the Rebel Pigeon' omg, too funny XDDD

posted by Tatsuri on 16 Mar 2008 01:22 pm

Love the art keep it up

posted by LToEV on 17 Mar 2008 05:15 am

Hahaha XDD <3

posted by Line-chan on 18 Mar 2008 09:04 am

On the page after this, you said you would appreciate people writing a correction for your English, so here are my suggestions:

On the second panel, "You almost make me forget why I was here" would be better if you changed it to "You almost made me forget why I was here" and on the third panel, "One of my friend" should be "One of my friends"

I hope that's helpful to you. :)

posted by Meaju on 28 Mar 2008 02:37 pm