Just to let you know, in the first panel, for the first speech bubble to have agreeing tenses, it needs to be: "Last night an unknown entity broke the Louvre Barrier and stole an anima from Barye's 'Lion'"

posted by Lykii on 30 May 2008 04:07 pm

Hidding should be hiding. I love the attention to detal, especially on the lace.

posted by fwoosh (Guest) on 07 Jul 2008 11:52 pm

penetrated not penerated... sorry had to say that lol. i like the plot line so far! ^^

posted by Teapotofdoom on 30 Jan 2009 06:14 pm